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Holding Hands, Holding Hearts

June 2, 2010
By WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
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WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you&#039;re alive, it isn&#039;t.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw.&quot;<br /> &quot;Words and hea

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Intertwined
Tied together

Held so tight


Yet like a feather


Showing love
Like precious arts

Holding Hands


Holding Hearts

Young and naïve
Unprepared

Love continued


Undeclared

Shining through
No mask can cover

Love is bright


So easy to Discover

Admitted

And told

Your fragile hand


Still in hold

Through thick

and thin

Still love


You’re in

© Kimberly C., Houston, TX

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This piece is based off the first day I held my love's hand...today
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WriterWithWings DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 12 2010 at 9:34 pm
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you&#039;re alive, it isn&#039;t.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw.&quot;<br /> &quot;Words and hea

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Woah. Wow, yea sure! Whenever you do, send me the link please! :)
hrf1434 GOLD said...
on Sep. 12 2010 at 2:44 pm
hrf1434 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
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Don&#039;t Judge a Girl by Her Cover

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It doesn't matter if they messed up I was wondering if I could sing the song than put it on youtube don't worry you will be credited

 

WriterWithWings DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 5 2010 at 10:20 pm
WriterWithWings DIAMOND, Seneca, South Carolina
61 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Here is the test to find whether your mission on earth is finished. If you&#039;re alive, it isn&#039;t.&rdquo;<br /> &quot;Love is a drug. a drug that distorts reality, and thats the point of it. No body would fall in love with someone who they really saw.&quot;<br /> &quot;Words and hea

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I apologize, when TeenInk posted this, an error must have occured with the spacing. There should be four lines per stanza