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Point of Life

June 15, 2010
By Mohneet BRONZE, Brampton, Other
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Mohneet BRONZE, Brampton, Other
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people always come and go

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Life is like a bed of roses,
And to support this I have many causes,
Life has petals, and has thorns,
It makes you experienced but worn,
Leaving you with a lot of bruises.

Life can make you sad,
By causing many experiences bad,
However, it can bless providential bliss,
It can feel like a lovely kiss,
Life is hard to live without getting mad.

© Lauren H., Johnson Creek, WI

The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this poem was losing a loved one. It made me realize that i cant be sad forever, life has its ups and downs.
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HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 10:44 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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this is so true....awesome poem.. i love how u related Life to roses...its perfect
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 6:03 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Wow this is so great. i love it and im sorry about what happend :(  if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great especially to anonymous thanx and ur really good!