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October 13, 2010
By natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
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natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
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Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don't worry so much.

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At night he cries…
He cries because everyone
tells him nothing but lies…
he cant take it anymore…
because of all the things gone and past,
this boy is nothing but sore…

he cant think without you on his mind…
and it seems every time he turns around
hes somehow in a bind…
it hurts so many, just to see how hurt he really is…
but we all know its you that he really does miss…

why did you have to leave…him all alone in this
crazy messed up world…? This world that to him
seems to be so cold…
you left him, without even a single hand to hold…
he tries, hard as he can just to get by…
but sometimes he thinks its not even worth a try…
but no matter what he never gives up…
sometimes he looks like that lost little pup…
but its just because hes lost you…
because he did and always will love you!

© Daniel H., Durham, NC

The author's comments:
this was inspired by a friend of mine's status on facebook believe it or not, he lost his mom 8 months ago and is still takin it really hard...so this is dedicated to him!
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natashajeanne1021 GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 4:52 pm
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
13 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don't worry so much.

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**i meant a couple states sorry my computer was being stupid 
natashajeanne1021 GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2010 at 1:24 pm
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
13 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don't worry so much.

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anaA couple states lol
erikampell SILVER said...
on Nov. 1 2010 at 10:08 am
erikampell SILVER, Willow Branch, Indiana
9 articles 4 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If at first you dont suceed, dont quit, push yourself" / "Push yourself, push yourself to the limit"

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how far is he away from you? are you to still close?
natashajeanne1021 GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2010 at 12:08 am
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
13 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don't worry so much.

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its ok, im only glad he decided to do whats best for him and that he is following his dreams, and i hope he can make them come true!! =)
erikampell SILVER said...
on Oct. 27 2010 at 9:53 am
erikampell SILVER, Willow Branch, Indiana
9 articles 4 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If at first you dont suceed, dont quit, push yourself" / "Push yourself, push yourself to the limit"

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i cant believe he moved away from you. surely that must be very hard.
natashajeanne1021 GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 11:19 pm
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
13 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don't worry so much.

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lol thanks i only write the truth and i really appreciate the comment thanks soooo much for reading this!! =) you should also check out some more of my work and let me know what you think? =)
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 11:09 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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awwwwwwwwwwwww omg!!! like omg!!! hah, but yeah it is super emotional... i love this, and i liked the line "he cant think without you on his mind" that was really beautiful, good job!! this is truly something to be proud of- it's a great piece
natashajeanne1021 GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 9:26 pm
natashajeanne1021 GOLD, Madelia, Minnesota
13 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is an important thing but it is also the cause of a lot of pain;Some wish for it to go faster while others wish for it to go faster.Then there are those that wish it could just end. So enjoy the time in life you are given and don&#039;t worry so much.

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thanks! and it means a lot to me that you took the time to read this and to leave a comment! =) hes doing better now he moved away and is tryin to start over so i hope he does a lot better now on
erikampell SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 12:51 pm
erikampell SILVER, Willow Branch, Indiana
9 articles 4 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If at first you dont suceed, dont quit, push yourself&quot; / &quot;Push yourself, push yourself to the limit&quot;

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this is super emotional. i love the reason you actually wrote this and i love that you dedicated it to him. i wish him the best of luck.