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My Love Story

August 16, 2011
By daponie SILVER, Lagos, Other
daponie SILVER, Lagos, Other
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon.


I was sad so I sat and began to cry
When I looked up I saw him pass by
It was like my tears went away
To a place faraway
He turned back and looked at me in the eye….
Before I knew it he said “hi”
I didn’t know what to say
But I wasn’t sure there was going to be another day
I had to think well before my action
Because of my tomorrows satisfaction
I looked at him, I smiled and
He came to me and held my hand
I felt like I was floating in the air
Things in mind were running as far as a hare
It was like we were in upendi
And we got there without spending any penny
He told me I was the one he loved
I told him he was my beloved
He asked me if we could go out
I acted as if I didn’t know what it is about
He took me to a very nice place
Where their food had a very nice taste
He looked at me and held my hand
I looked at the beer and asked for the brand
He said it didn’t matter
That without me his head will scatter
Before I knew it there came a kiss
I obliged because I knew it wasn’t a risk
He told me he will be there with me until the end
Promising that he’ll always be my friend
I looked up but he wasn’t there
I turned back but no one was there
I looked around but no one resembled him
That was when I realized that it was just a dream
That was the best moment of my life
Though it ended so quickly as If I was stabbed with a knife


The author's comments:
This was one of the first poems i ever wrote..

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daponie SILVER said...
on Sep. 4 2011 at 7:10 pm
daponie SILVER, Lagos, Other
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon.

thanks.... ok show him the poem!!!!.... :D im glad you like it!!!

Nelly B:) said...
on Sep. 3 2011 at 2:24 pm
DIS kain poem sef ai fnk Yukay shud c it he'd probably luvvv it......