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Rejection

October 20, 2011
By Shadowfoxz DIAMOND, Washington D.C, District Of Columbia
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My heart so warm
Your heart so cold
When you said no
My flame you stole
And now I'm frozen
How could I ever warm another?
You still have my fire
What if I find my future lover?
You must not care
About my internal agony
You took my love and crushed it
What am I left to believe?
I've given up on love
Is that what you desire?
Cast all the others away
Because you still have my fire
Pain screams louder
Than my mouth will tell my feelings
And now it's sealed shut
I'm constantly grieving
Maybe there will be a day
When I feel no more pain
But right now I do
You still hold my flame

© Tabatha B., Peoria, IL

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Shadowfoxz DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 27 2011 at 2:55 pm
Shadowfoxz DIAMOND, Washington D.C, District Of Columbia
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I have new work coming out every week. Yaay.

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thank you as well. If you haven't already, please rate some of my other work. I'm sure the range of emotions will surprise you if anything!
Smiler4Life GOLD said...
on Oct. 27 2011 at 2:39 pm
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wow, really good! I loved how you compared 'love' to 'flame'. BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY.
Shadowfoxz DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 10:10 pm
Shadowfoxz DIAMOND, Washington D.C, District Of Columbia
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Thanks so much for the comment! Be sure to check out some of my other work, I think you'll be pleased! Oh and I'll return the favor as well!
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE said...
on Oct. 26 2011 at 8:28 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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OMG i can't believe i'm the first to comment on this because it is soooooo amazing!