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November 2, 2011
By Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
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Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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They gave it, their all for us
So we can still say this and thus
About what we deserve
But we didn’t serve
Like when they fought and died for us

© Elizabeth B., Wichita Falls, TX

The author's comments:
With Veterans day approaching, I decided I should submit this one. Not that good, I think, but at least it is something for the vet who are alive- unlike my grandfather. Hopefully it will get accepted in time.
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This article has 42 comments.

FearlessAngel GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2013 at 11:11 am
FearlessAngel GOLD, Bellevue, Nebraska
10 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Pain is just a simple compromise, so we can get what we want out of it.&quot;<br /> ~Paramore

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Agreed! Please finish it!
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 4:50 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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You actually aren't.  Between the 2 of us I got over 100.
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 4:49 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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Thanks.  This is the best Limerick I ever wrote, so it's the only one I got published.  I'm not really good at long stuff.
Neytiri GOLD said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 4:42 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you&#039;ll die today. Dream as if you&#039;ll live forever.

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Woah!!! That was amazing. So short but yet so descriptive. Extremely impressive Lord- Flavius-Jacobius-Ossummuss.... aka Flav!!! x x x x x x x x<3<3<3<3<3
Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 12:43 pm
you should finish it, and then submit it!
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 12:41 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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Yeah.  I started writing a Pearl Harbor historical fiction, but quit a long time ago.
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 12:01 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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Thanks, that was kind of what I was going for. :)
Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 9:47 am
I just realized,  you should have written something like this for today, December 7th, 1941, Remember Pearl Harbor, "A date which will live in infamy" ~Franklin D. Roosevelt
WhiteWings GOLD said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 3:11 pm
WhiteWings GOLD, Houston, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing lasts forever on this Earth. Smile

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very moving
Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 12:00 pm

that's nice......*yawn

jk, but you wanted the comments, you got about 50 yesterday  :P  (idc if I am exageratting)

Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 11:38 am
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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Yeah, I was thinking the same thing...
Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 3:59 pm
wow....we are having a conversation on like five different things, and it took me a whole hour to see this comment  lol
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:59 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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Fail........
Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:46 pm
it does o_O  I ACCOMPLISHED MY SECRET MISSION!!!  I AM BORED!!!  oh wait...my mission was to get unbored....*sigh
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:24 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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Yeah, it kind of shows...
Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 11:03 am
you kept your word, and told me.....sort of.....whatever, CONGRATULATIONS!!!!   (I'm bored, can you tell?)
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 10:37 am
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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First piece to get 500 views, and still 5 stars.  Thanks peeps!
Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 6:05 pm
Thanx  :D  you know where I will be....hehehe  LOL xD
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 5:54 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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Not quite 500.  I'll let you know when it gets there, though!
Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 5:52 pm
wow, 500 views o_O   that's awesome!