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The girl she was, the woman she could be

January 31, 2013
By Jake957 BRONZE, Mobile, Alabama
Jake957 BRONZE, Mobile, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like you're gonna die tomorrow


She cries
With tears in her eyes
She's in pain
Slowly going insane
She says she's fine
But she has been saying so since she was nine
She feels as if there is a hole in her heart
But that is only one part
If only people knew that she was a jewel
Maybe they wouldn't be so cruel
She has a mother
Who doesn't love her
And a father
Who has traveled farther
She doesn't know why she is alive
Why can't she just go back to the age of five
She decides to take her own life
Not knowing that one day she would make a great wife
She was a teen
Never mean
This is real
No funny deal
I'm not a preacher
Nor a teacher
I'm only a writer acting as a highlighter


The author's comments:
I had a dream and had to put it on paper

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Jake957 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 6 2013 at 6:16 pm
Jake957 BRONZE, Mobile, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like you're gonna die tomorrow

Thanks everyone

on Mar. 6 2013 at 4:18 pm
Whitehouse503 SILVER, North Waterboro, Maine
7 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end you should always do the right thing, even if it's hard."

really, really great :D

on Mar. 6 2013 at 2:41 pm
Becky12321 BRONZE, Murfreesboro, Tennessee
3 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be careful who you love because they just might break your heart.

hi warlock i miss you... I miss you and Jake and well everyone...

on Mar. 6 2013 at 12:43 pm
Becky12321 BRONZE, Murfreesboro, Tennessee
3 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be careful who you love because they just might break your heart.

Amazing go Jake!!!

on Mar. 6 2013 at 12:41 pm
JesikahW78 GOLD, Ogden, Utah
18 articles 7 photos 19 comments
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!