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February 10, 2013
By Jake957 BRONZE, Mobile, Alabama
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Live like you're gonna die tomorrow

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The wind blows
The water flows
I feel like I am about to fall
This life is just to tall
As I let the water eat me
And the hail beat me
I feel defeated
And mistreated
I wonder why I was ever here
I'm saying this with a tear
No one knows what goes on in my mind
They are so very blind
Life is nothing but a show
And it seems to be my foe

© Zachary C., Arlington, TN

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Life is like a storm in some ways
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Jake957 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 6 2013 at 6:14 pm
Jake957 BRONZE, Mobile, Alabama
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I have the same name as your brother?
Becky12321 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 6 2013 at 12:58 pm
Becky12321 BRONZE, Murfreesboro, Tennessee
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wow go jake listen I'm sorry i left but listen you do Have a name of my brothers Jake........