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Your Loss

July 6, 2014
By Sparrow01 SILVER, Appalachin, New York
Sparrow01 SILVER, Appalachin, New York
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You once had a secret admirer
Who kept your image always beside her.
You lived in her brain,
But she loved you in vain.
So, she moved on and found someone better.



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on Jul. 12 2014 at 9:36 am
Sparrow01 SILVER, Appalachin, New York
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Thank you :)

on Jul. 12 2014 at 7:50 am
Myvoice4change SILVER, Other, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything will be ok in the end. If it's not okay, it's not the end."

nice rhyming scheme, very catchy

on Jul. 11 2014 at 3:32 pm
Sparrow01 SILVER, Appalachin, New York
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Thank you so much :)

Nautilus2 said...
on Jul. 10 2014 at 10:45 pm
Nautilus2, Wellesley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The world is a dangerous place to live; not because of the people who are evil, but because of the people who don&#039;t do anything about it.&quot;<br /> -Albert Einstein

I like how this was from the point of view of the admired not the admirer but still captured her feelings. It was unique and bitter-sweetly satasfying 

on Jul. 10 2014 at 9:17 pm
Sparrow01 SILVER, Appalachin, New York
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I feel ya girl, mine too ;P

on Jul. 10 2014 at 9:00 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work<br /> -Minho in &quot;To The Beautiful You&quot;

Lol my love life in a poem! Great job^^