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It's Okay

September 21, 2009
By indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
38 articles 0 photos 25 comments

You say it’s okay
But really it’s not
Inside dying decay
Outside you’ve fought

It’s a two sided
Heck of a mask
You’ve confided
To finish the task


Sing to me………….
Talk to me…………..
Like you see……….
What I’ll be……….


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on Jan. 20 2015 at 4:10 am
Hulagirl808 BRONZE, Keaau, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
" If you enter this world knowing you are loved and you leave this world knowing the same, then everything in between can be dealt with. " - Michael Jackson(King Of Pop)

I like it. Short and sweet.

on Feb. 20 2013 at 12:22 pm
DaphneeBee143 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep Calm and may the odds be ever in your favor

it doesnt have many complete thoughts.. but it keeps me thinking.. good job

on Jul. 7 2011 at 8:28 pm
Autumn-Rain SILVER, West Lafayette, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 74 comments
I love how you use such short thoughts... and the way you don't really complete each bit makes people keep thinking about it... I really like it...

kms777 GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 4:18 pm
kms777 GOLD, Winn, Michigan
16 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"learn from your mistakes but regret not a thing"

wow this is great i love poems that are short but still it speaks so much. and its so easy to relate 2. i have sum short 1s 2 but there not as good as this i hope ull read them and giv me sum  hints on how to make them better

on Jun. 19 2010 at 12:37 am
inovermyhead BRONZE, Arlington, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

I love it,

(((((:

Keep onn writing(((((:


on Mar. 24 2010 at 6:58 am
Bella913 SILVER, New City, New York
5 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death is easy, living is harder."

its reallt nice, short and sweet!!

sad darkness said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 3:22 pm
this is awesome i write like this a lot check them out when they are up!

Cady_ PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 2:18 am
Cady_ PLATINUM, Godley, Texas
25 articles 5 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover.", and "When you judge another, you do not define them, you define yourself." "Cherish your life." "Love equals eternity."

I LOVE IT!!!FIVE STARS!!!!<3Cady