This is an amazing poem. I am sorry for your loss, but out of something so terrible cam something beautiful. Its brings people just a tiny step toward knowing the pain you are feeling.

thank you soo much.

oh...my...god

dats so beutiful *cry,cry* really

Omgsh. Sarah. This is soo sad:(

im soo sorry for what happened to you & your family! :( ..

it makes me just wanna cry! :(

i love you soo much & im soo deeply sorry for what happened!

Love you<3

I love you too, kassidy dear.

Sarah, wow.when I read this I was gettin all teared up. I'm so sorry for what happened to you & your family. Everytime I think about it, I get depressed. Sarah you know I'm ALWAYS here for you when you need to talk to..whether its at school or what. I love you Sarah dear (:

thank you so very much. It's ok i cried when i wrote it. Thank you so much for your praise, it has made my day better. :)

Halfway through the lyrics, the floodgates behind my eyes opened. I actually started tearing up over the bitter sadness of this song! Death is a terrible monster that we all fear, and the way you put that idea to paper is absolutely amazing. The last line, "I know now you can't hide from death," was one that truly effected my crying and take on your song. What a touching way to sum it all up! The image that you painted in my mind of all of your emotions with your dad's death is incredible, such a melancholy picture. Amazing job with this song! Also, I love the picture you've included with the little girl in her father's arms. It puts in view what no one could say in words. Plus, the repitition of "daddy" gives the reader a chance to relate because they have memories of chanting it lovingly to their own fathers. This had very emotional lyrics, and if it can bring tears, that tells you just how good it really is. I can not say just how sorry I am that you lost your father, but I can tell you that he would be proud of you for writing this piece. :)