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"I Can't Say Yet"

October 17, 2009
By J.L.Morgan GOLD, Harrison, Ohio
J.L.Morgan GOLD, Harrison, Ohio
19 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everyone calls you Amazing, I just Call you Mine"-Martina McBride


Who's ready to commit that way
And who's been there before
Who knows why I feel like this...
I'm just not sure
Who's been down the yellow brick road?
And who's totally let go
Of everything they were hold'in back
Cause love is a strong word
I just can't say yet

So I'm mad and I'm angry
But may I add that I've been cranky
It's your fault and you're wrong
So my words don't belong
Who's ever been mad?
And who's ever got in a fight
Who has always known?
That they were always right
Who's been down the yellow brick road?
And who's totally let go
Of everything they were hold'in back
Cause Sorry is a strong word
I just can't say yet

So I think I know you inside and out
And I think I've told you everything I'm about
Whose ever been this far
Or shot over their shooting star
Or have someone who wants to
Spend their life with you
Who's been down the yellow brick road?
And who's totally let go
Of everything they were hold'in back
Cause yes is a strong word
Cause yes is a strong word-
That I'm not sure...if I can say yet?



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cmb302 said...
on Dec. 20 2010 at 11:18 am
cmb302, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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i liked this poem the poet was really in touch with their feelings i feel as if the poet wrote this poem and wanted his audience to feel what they were going through i loved it

 


ginny-gram said...
on Sep. 23 2010 at 6:09 pm

fantastic.  i loved it  keep writting

much insight.


jmmom13 said...
on Sep. 23 2010 at 12:35 pm
Great Lyrics!  Show's alot of feeling, Keep writing!!

on Sep. 1 2010 at 2:39 pm
Jessie Morgan, Harrison, Ohio
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the speaker in this is a girl, and thank you so much for your comment <3

AlyssaNeal said...
on Sep. 1 2010 at 7:37 am
AlyssaNeal, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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LOVE THESE LYRICS,

It shows how he.she wants to say "i love you" but they are scared.


on Jun. 26 2010 at 10:17 am
JocelynnTaylor GOLD, Templeton, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am a writer, and so I write.<br /> I am a thinker, and so I think.<br /> I am a human, and so I have human thoughts and feelings.

I really like this song. I really like the "Who's been down the yellow brick road?  And who's totally let go Of everything they were hold'in back"  I really like that.  keep up the good work!!! ^_^

on Jun. 26 2010 at 1:24 am
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
11 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Dreaming is what makes the world go round&quot;

could you please comment my song "Perfect guy" or rate please and thanks =) it would help A LOT

on Jun. 26 2010 at 1:23 am
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
11 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Dreaming is what makes the world go round&quot;

very good! i like "Who's been down the yellow brick road? and who's totally let go" 

susie;D said...
on Nov. 25 2009 at 1:54 pm
that was really good...i love to write songs like this..great work