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Heart Intertwine

February 12, 2010
By NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
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I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.<br /> - Susan B. Anthony

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He looks right threw me as I walk past him down the hall way.
I wish for a new me, Life goes on day after day,
My hearts was intertwined in his hands, and my souls was his for the taking.
Now my hearts breaking.
"Oh im cursing his name and fighting this pain, I hang my head in shame taking it day by day,
Looking at you looking at her we fell apart no chance to make a new start."

© Eveliz V., Bayamon, Puerto Rico

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This is just the begining of a new song about this guy at my school.
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NerdGirlVictoria SILVER said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 4:22 pm
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
8 articles 7 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.<br /> - Susan B. Anthony

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Thanks I will sure try lol (wich means i will)
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 3:39 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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&quot;I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, &#039;I have always thought that but never found the words for it.&#039;&quot; -anonymous

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Can completely relate. There's a guy at my school just like that. It breaks you up and I think your lyrics really show that emotion. Great work! Check out my work if you ever get the opportunity!
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 11:55 pm
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.<br /> - Susan B. Anthony

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Thank you this one i was crying when i wrote it
*Myrissa* said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 11:36 pm
*Myrissa*, Phoenix, Arizona
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I want to cry. :) partially because i am going through such a dilemma. Its wonderful though. it brings back memories and reminds me everyday he's not mine. I know the feeling of invisibility. you can't help but hold out your heart for him to take and hoping he would take it, knowing he won't. I love it so far. keep it up! :)