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Fading light

February 25, 2011
By Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments

It'll be time to close the book,
the story's about the end
It's like spring is over
and flowers won't grow anymore
Things aren't like
they used to be before
We can't go on like this
'cause..

Chorus:
Our love is
a fading light
End of the movie
the screen goes black
The clock strikes 12
Time to go,
my prince charming,
I can't be here anymore
It's the middle of the night
and we're a fading light.

The wind Blows stranger
separating us
We can't come closer
anymore
The two of us
used to be like one
like the sea and the sky
together but we didn't realise
we were separated by the skyline
We're that star that won't shine anymore

(chorus:
Our love is
a fading light
End of the movie
the screen goes black
The clock strikes 12
Time to go,
my prince charming,
I can't be here anymore
It's the middle of the night
and we're a fading light.

End of the show
time's up
stand up and clap
So good bye
'cause we're a fading light



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on Jun. 18 2011 at 3:01 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.<br /> ~Some random person on the Internet :P

This is a very good song. The thing with song lyrics on TI is that it's hard to figure out the beat of the song, and in turn difficult to know whether the rhythm flows correctly to make it sound good. I'm looking forward to hearing it sung someday. :)

Camii GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2011 at 10:58 am
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
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yeah i'm working on that ,, thanks!

Camii GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2011 at 10:56 am
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thank you:D           

Camii GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2011 at 10:55 am
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
i'm glad you liked it:) ! thanks!!!

on Apr. 1 2011 at 8:46 pm
TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Love is not a feeling; it is a gift, an act, an ultimate sacrifice. -Me (Em)

I can say for sure that this is a lot deeper than Taylor *Swift lyrics! (And Swift is only famous for her lyrics.) I love your rhyme scheme and chorus.

on Apr. 1 2011 at 8:39 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

i liked this alot!! =) it sounded really cool in my head.. Nice job!!

on Apr. 1 2011 at 6:11 pm
LittleMidnight PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Life is but a book just waiting to be filled, you make your own story

Nice! I really like it, and now I kinda wanna hear it sung. Good job!

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2011 at 12:09 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thank you(:              

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2011 at 12:08 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thanks soo much!! :)

on Mar. 26 2011 at 5:26 pm
Gettysburg63 PLATINUM, Waukesha, Wisconsin
23 articles 1 photo 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you are going to win any battle, you have to do one thing. You have to make the mind run the body. Never let the body tell the mind what to do... the body is never tired if the mind is not tired.&quot; -General George S. Patton

Well, I can't say I'm an expert on music, but I think you've found your talent. Good luck on getting your song published. It deserves it.

on Mar. 26 2011 at 12:09 pm
Karaliin BRONZE, Walnut, California
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This is such a sad song. I love how you allude to those common endings. :) I think we can all relate to the feeling. </3

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 5:47 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
*stronger (in the song it says stranger but actually it is stronger)

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 5:17 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thank you:)

on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:34 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Really good. I like it! :)

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:10 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
(but a little slower than faster)

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:10 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments

thanks soo much!! it means a lot to me:)

i think it's either not too slow or too fast :)

 


on Mar. 21 2011 at 5:00 pm
Sammiekay SILVER, St. Peters, Missouri
8 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Who you are is not what you did.&quot; -Taylor Swift

I love this one!!

i like the line we're that star that won't shine anymore!!

its amazingg! i wish i could hear it sung!

is it a slow or fast song??