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I can't stop Loving you now

July 29, 2012
By poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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You live so far away from me,
all the way on the other side of the globe.

I don’t know when I’ll see you again.

You live so far away from me,
you have friends I don’t even know.

I wonder if you know my feelings for you.

You speak a different language,
at least I know that.

But you will still never be mine.

I don’t know how my love could be so foolish
but I can’t stop loving you now.

I can’t stop loving you now.


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on Dec. 9 2013 at 9:08 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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eARTh

Yeah, I get that! The metaphors would make it a little longer and more poetic! Thanks guys!

on Dec. 9 2013 at 11:38 am
Dr.FeelGood GOLD, Allemen, Iowa
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great job but i agree with krasota you could really spice it up

on Jun. 15 2013 at 8:47 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

Since it is song lyrics, I think it could've been a little longer (unless you were to have a lot of instrumental parts), but overall I think this was a relateable poem. My suggestion would be to include some metaphors in here to spice it up a bit. :D Otherwise, great job!

Katrselyn said...
on Aug. 9 2012 at 7:09 pm
Katrselyn, Kankakee, Illinois
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i feel as if this is more a poetry thing than lyrics. but could be a chorus part. I like it. I can relate(: