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Shadows Of Love

April 19, 2013
By MeggieMills SILVER, Baltimore, Maryland
MeggieMills SILVER, Baltimore, Maryland
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I write...so therefor I am a Writer.


When I walk in the park
My point always hits its mark
The beautiful looking swans
The small peaceful ponds
Those amazing statues
Salt-tasting cashews
Beauty calls
The small waterfalls
This beauty from above
Is called Love
But then the statues will rust
Oh if only the bend isn't a must
The swan will die!
The waterfalls will cry
The once peaceful will become-
something to send jitters
The salt-cashew will taste bitter
And here
The love will just disappear
This once beauty from above
Is called love
This shadow of love
I'd say a bad no
This once beauty from above
is called love...


The author's comments:
I wrote this song while strolling in a beautiful park with swans, ponds and small waterfalls and thought -like love, this stuff here would disappear and die away. So that was what came through me while writing this.

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on Aug. 8 2013 at 1:09 am
MeggieMills SILVER, Baltimore, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
I write...so therefor I am a Writer.

Thank you guys so much! 

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 12:45 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

I really like your word choice! Its great!  

on Aug. 1 2013 at 12:39 pm
bloodwraith1 GOLD, Cape Town, Other
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time is what keeps things from happening at once.<br /> i will show you fear in a hand full of dust.

I like it a lot

on May. 7 2013 at 12:55 pm
Breezey PLATINUM, Orange City, Iowa
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Nice poem ... very very beautiful keep writing ;)  

on Apr. 26 2013 at 6:23 am
MeggieMills SILVER, Baltimore, Maryland
9 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
I write...so therefor I am a Writer.

Thanks Dreamer! 

on Apr. 25 2013 at 1:49 pm
Dreamer_ SILVER, Milton On, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We&#039;re all mad here&quot; ~ Cheshire Cat<br /> <br /> &quot;Whats your dream?&quot;<br /> &quot;To go, away.&quot; ~ Surfs Up.

Beautiful! I like it :) 

on Apr. 25 2013 at 1:12 pm
MeggieMills SILVER, Baltimore, Maryland
9 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
I write...so therefor I am a Writer.

Please comment and tell me what you think!