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Pure Innocence

June 5, 2014
By SabrinaFaire SILVER, Odenville, Alabama
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"You aren't going to impose the patriarchal paradigm on ME." Alaska Young

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The blooming blood from
a torrent sea
washed up out of a
simple symphony.
Once so pure,
only bloomed to be torn.
How beautiful doth be
without the sin I do bleed.

© Hui Y., Potsdam, NY

The author's comments:
Through this poem, I tried to convey the true beauty of a child's innocence. I see every person to be sent from heaven (simple symphony) yet this world corrupts us and tires our purity.
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Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER said...
on Jul. 11 2014 at 12:04 pm
Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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&quot;You May Encounter Many Defeats But You Must Not Be Defeated&quot; By- Dr. Maya Angelou

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How long have you been writing because this is beautiful!?
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 27 2014 at 9:50 am
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
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&quot;the greatest thing you&#039;ll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return.&quot; -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

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Very pure :)
HudaZav SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2014 at 10:25 am
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
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&quot;Nothing is impossible; the word itself says &#039;I&#039;m possible&#039;!&quot; -Audrey Hepburn

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Youre writing style is beautifully abstract and meaningful, you are a great writer!
SabrinaFaire SILVER said...
on Jun. 22 2014 at 10:41 pm
SabrinaFaire SILVER, Odenville, Alabama
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&quot;You aren&#039;t going to impose the patriarchal paradigm on ME.&quot; Alaska Young

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Thank you so much, I really do try!
Luv4Ever SILVER said...
on Jun. 22 2014 at 9:13 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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A miracle is just another name for hard work<br /> -Minho in &quot;To The Beautiful You&quot;

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you have a beautiful writing style with intricate details intertwined with emotions that force the reader to reflect upon ur words^^