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Colourful Melody

February 12, 2015
By Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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[Chorus]
Colourful Melody
Floats 'round my head, can't you see?
Rainbow Notes, Prism Heart
I liked you right you right from the start, now


Colourful Melody
When you're around, I can't breathe
Prism Notes Rainbow Heart
I loved you right from the start, oh~


[Verse]
When I'm with you, my heart beats out of tune
I can't write, I can't think, I can only love you
Sappy love songs won't tell how I
Really truly feel


[Chorus]
Colourful Melody
Floats 'round my head, can't you see?
Rainbow Notes, Prism Heart
Heartbeat flying off the charts


Colourful Melody
Your boyfriend, I wanna be
Prism Notes, Rainbow Heart
Feels like I might fall apart


[Verse]
When I'm with you, I can't breathe, it's true
Don't you know, I can only think of you~
Nothing I can say can tell you how
I really truly feel


Oh~


[Bridge]
Colourful Melody 

Play a song only for me

Rainbow Notes, Prism Heart

Wish for you upon a star, oh~


[Chorus]
Colourful Melody
Floats 'round my head, can't you see?
Rainbow Notes, Prism Heart
I liked you right you right from the start, now


Colourful Melody
When you're around, I can't breathe
Prism Notes Rainbow Heart
I loved you right from the start, oh~

 

Ah~

© Olivia E., Alto, MI

The author's comments:

I was inspired by a song title only- Colorful x Melody. I've actually never heard it before. I should go do that. 

 

It seems my song has nothing to do with it. That's nice.

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Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 12 2015 at 1:06 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Thank you, Helena. I'm glad you were able to visualize it so well!
Helena_Noel BRONZE said...
on Jun. 12 2015 at 1:55 am
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Song lyrics are hard, unless you give a genre or an idea of the style it would be played in... me? I got a very distinct brassy and bluesy, old fashioned love croon vibe from it. You know, the kind of tune that makes you want to close your eyes and sway along... preferably with your honey in your arms!
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2015 at 10:41 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Well, you made me laugh, so that's nice. I'm glad you like it as a poem- reading lyrics is also difficult for me. I don't really know where this came from @-@
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2015 at 12:42 pm
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
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as far as a "poem" would go; Aces. as far as a song.... i haven't the foggiest idea... i suck at reading lyrics and i have no idea how it is supposed to sound with the music.... sorry if i didn't help
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 19 2015 at 3:54 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Thank you, itsyourmaingirl.
itsyourmaingirl SILVER said...
on Mar. 18 2015 at 8:21 pm
itsyourmaingirl SILVER, Flint, Texas
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I really enjoyed reading this piece. Great work!
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2015 at 12:44 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Thank you, Ariel. I'm very happy to have so many people liking my work.
Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER said...
on Feb. 28 2015 at 5:51 pm
Ariel_Fluffyy SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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This is beautiful. I like this piece a lot. You did a... I would say great job but the doesn't even touch the tip of the iceberg for me. This leaves me speechless.
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 20 2015 at 6:53 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you very much! I currently have two other lyrics up as well, actually.
GwennyBird17 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2015 at 5:13 pm
GwennyBird17 BRONZE, Southampton, Pennsylvania
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Powerful, amazing, beautiful... I can go on forever! GREAT JOB!!!
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 19 2015 at 5:05 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you very much, Midnight.
midnightwoah said...
on Feb. 18 2015 at 9:33 pm
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
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#JoDawn wrote a great melody! This sounds like it could become a great song, keep writing!
RobotPenn. SILVER said...
on Feb. 18 2015 at 10:44 am
RobotPenn. SILVER, El Paso, Texas
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Oh yeah, angst can be loads of fun. I've actually got a bunch of favorite songs full of it. You never can go wrong with just simple and sweet though. Let me know when your song's been accepted. :)
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 17 2015 at 10:22 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you for reviewing!
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 17 2015 at 9:36 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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I actually did write an angsty song, it just hasn't been accepted yet ./////. I did write this with the intention of causing smiles, though. I'm glad it worked.
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 17 2015 at 9:34 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you very much! I currently only have my haiku published (other than this), but I did submit two other songs, so hopefully you can see those soon as well.
WOWriting SILVER said...
on Feb. 17 2015 at 12:32 pm
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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Catchy tune. Not too good at reviewing songs, but good rhythm. Well done!
RobotPenn. SILVER said...
on Feb. 17 2015 at 10:29 am
RobotPenn. SILVER, El Paso, Texas
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This is so sweet. Happy songs make me happy. Angst can get so tiring, you know? This song made me smile though. Keep up the awesome work! :)
Ana143 GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 2015 at 10:25 am
Ana143 GOLD, Bolivar, Ohio
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This was amazing! I am speechless. Keep it up :)
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 16 2015 at 3:09 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Thank you, Emma!