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March 11, 2019
By Yera_flores BRONZE, Atascosa, Texas
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My room is a mess 

a mess that can't be seen

sounds crazy huh 

maybe because im just a teen   

 


Im speaking from my room 

the mess you can't see

Is it really that messy?

I can bearly breathe 

 


Im numb to the mess

the mess that can't be seen 

maybe hide it under the bed?

atleast It's unseen  

 


just breath you say

Is it going to cure my pain?

imagine how it would be 

if your loss was your gain 

 


My room is a mess 

please be patient with me

I promise to be great

I'm just a teen 

© Stefanie G., Norwalk, CT

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