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Gone

October 20, 2021
By PineApplemushrooMs PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
PineApplemushrooMs PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
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I miss you guys more than you will ever know.

The heat’s cranked up, 

but my heart is snow.

My tears hit the floor as I walk down the hall.

Who knew I’d miss you more in the fall.



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on Nov. 1 2021 at 4:53 pm
PineApplemushrooMs PLATINUM, Dayton, Ohio
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Honestly, I don't know much about individual types of poetry, I just write it. So most of my poetry will be classified as free verse or other bc I honestly don't know.

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Oct. 30 2021 at 9:38 am
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

This is a good poem, but does it belong in the sonnet category? I thought some of the basic rules is that it must be 14 lines long and ten syllables in each line...