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If i Were king

October 15, 2009
By Codykinz BRONZE, Foster City, California
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If I was the king
I would make you my queen
Even if our
Love had to go unseen
And if you were an angel
And I burned in hell
I would still love you
Even if I couldn’t tell
You are a star
Way up in my sky
While I’m stuck down on earth
Wishing I could fly
Up into space
And try to find you
I feel so confused
Nothing else left to do
Because I know the truth
That we will never be
But when I close my eyes at night
You’re all I can see.


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This article has 6 comments.

Swanson said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 12:04 pm
I enjoyed reading this poem because it was a nice declaration of love.
Arluanna PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 7 2010 at 6:26 pm
Arluanna PLATINUM, Broken Arrow, Oklahoma
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I liked it, but I have yet to find a poem under 'sonnets' that is a true sonnet. Irritating, but unavoidable. Well written; keep it up
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 6:48 pm
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this is amazing, and puts into words exactly how i feel right now. wonderful ~<3
Alexx627 said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 2:51 pm
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lol don't repeat yourself :P
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 1:36 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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wow :) i think its a bit shaky at some parts, but all around its a wonderful poem! :) the flow is great, and i love how sweet and honest the poem is :) the last four lines are my favorite...it almost made my heart break! :) all around a great poem-i can feel all the emotion. bravo :) 5 stars! check out some of my work and comment, i would love to hear what you have to say. oh and keep writing! :)
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 1:35 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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wow! :) its a bit shaky at parts, but all around i think it's great! the last four lines of the poem are for sure my favorite...it almost made my heart break! this is just a great poem :) i love it. keep writing :) oh and check out some of my work if you could, i would LOVE your opinion.