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"Drunk"
November 9, 2009
That night I wish he’d handed me the keys.
We just left from a magnificent bar.
The vodka and rum were his enemies.
At first he couldn’t even find his car.
I asked him, “are you sure you want to drive?”
He said, “no worries son, I am all good.”
Thinking to myself would we all survive?
That second we were friends with the wood.
Crawling around the car into the street.
My hands and face were drenched in all blood.
His head in the windshield, out of his seat.
He was unbuckled, his car full of mud.
Blaming myself for what happened that day,
Can’t bring back my father in any way.
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Uhhhhh.....yeah. said...
on May. 14 2010 at 9:09 am
This poem is very touching. Im still new to the whole poem thing but this is a great poem.
CreativeScript PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 12:27 am
I just finished writing my story called "Driving Drunk" it's not up yet. But you should all check out my stuff. Rate, Comment! Ill look at your stuff.
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 1:55 pm
lol ur comment kinda sounds like a furtune cookie lol hehehe
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 1:54 pm
Wow great poem
with a great impact
keep up the good work
with a great impact
keep up the good work
partsman25 said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 10:52 am
very moving..i see big things happeneing in your immediate future
Toast said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 7:46 pm
Talented young writer.
