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Apology

February 7, 2010
By IsobelFree DIAMOND, Hamilton, Other
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"As long as there is open road, the familiar has the most formidable competitor." - Anonymous

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When I lie in the grass and the sky’s pouring rain,
I think about you and my heart pounds again,
remembering when you reached for my hand, and
the picnic that didn’t quite go as planned.
We sat in a storm, our hair dripping wet –
you said that you loved me. But I’ll never forget
the way your eyes blazed when you found out my lies;
the way that you hit me, the way that I cried;
the way you stalked off, with no second glance.
All I wanted from you was one second chance.
But it’s too late now, as I lie here and weep.
It was my mistake, and I got in too deep.
I wish, deep inside, to say sorry again,
as I get up and dance, and the sky’s pouring rain.

© Sadra L., Buckeye, AZ

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outsidethebox SILVER said...
on Feb. 2 2011 at 12:12 pm
outsidethebox SILVER, Nassau, Other
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Be yourself and above asll let who you are, what you are, what you believe through every sentence you write, every piece you finish.

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This rocks

 

IsobelFree DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 7:53 pm
IsobelFree DIAMOND, Hamilton, Other
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&quot;As long as there is open road, the familiar has the most formidable competitor.&quot; - Anonymous

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Thanks so much! Sure, I'll read some of your work . :)
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:03 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

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amazing!!! :) wow. i can feel all the emotion and heartbreak in this poem. very strong and well written piece :) i LOVE it!! would you mind checking out soe of my work? id love your opinion :) keep writing....your good :)
IsobelFree DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 8:45 pm
IsobelFree DIAMOND, Hamilton, Other
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&quot;As long as there is open road, the familiar has the most formidable competitor.&quot; - Anonymous

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Thanks! :)
lilyraven BRONZE said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 4:39 pm
lilyraven BRONZE, Veneta, Oregon
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Wow this is really good! I love it. Nice job =)
IsobelFree DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 2:39 pm
IsobelFree DIAMOND, Hamilton, Other
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lol I totally posted this in the wrong section! I realized as soon as I sent it out for aproval that I'd put it in "Sonnet" instead of "Free Verse". Oh well. :P