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My Love

May 12, 2010
By Kristoffer Escalante BRONZE, Miami, Florida
Kristoffer Escalante BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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Ah, your skin is smooth like fresh winter snow,
But that is only the first thing I love.
Could it be how your elegant eyes glow?
Or how you are as graceful like a dove?

You can’t have flaws for I see perfection,
How you brighten my day is undefined.
For my love for you burns with a passion,
And this passion I speak of clouds my mind.

I do not believe that I deserve you,
Oh my darling you have perfect white teeth.
The way you smile makes my day feel new,
Do you love me? If so what a relief.

But baby how my love for you still grows
Even if your love for me doesn’t show.


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on Jun. 4 2010 at 4:55 pm
RosyOptimism DIAMOND, Coronado, California
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This is really good! Keep on writing. If you can please check out some of my work, i would appreciate your feedback.