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The two of us

August 20, 2010
By rdewees1 BRONZE, Downigntown, Pennsylvania
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This feeling inside me burns like wild fire
Consuming much more than just the soul
Why cant this blaze just burn out and tire
As this ever burning love takes its toll

The distance between us starts to close
The beat of my heart begins to double
As we come together feelings compose
If they knew our love; anger would bubble

I’d hold her in my arms until time ends
Showering her with love unbending
And as her beauty and love shows and blends
We say our vows while never descending

In marriage I unite with my love
Living the amazing life I dreamed of

© Tag H., Galesburg, IL

The author's comments:
Parents always say that the love teens feel will end, it's "puppy love." in reality for most of us this love is the most real thing we have ever esxpeirienced.
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