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Open Wounds (Forever a Memory)

October 22, 2010
By MomoSaysRawrr BRONZE, Kankakee, Illinois
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MomoSaysRawrr BRONZE, Kankakee, Illinois
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&quot;In the end, everyone&#039;s going to hurt you. You just have to find the ones worth suffering for.&quot;<br /> -Bob Marely<br /> <br /> &quot;Don&#039;t narrate... Paint! Draw! Build! CREATE!&quot; -Jack London

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My wounds are open,
The blood is flowing,
Hurt again,
But it won't be showing.

I'll keep it all
Keep it all inside,
For no one to see,
It'll be my burden to hide.

I'm ashamed to say,
I love you,
After what you did,
With whatever you may do.

I may be just a distant memory,
A ghost of your past,
But the memory of you,
Forever will it last.

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darkdestro27 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 29 2012 at 2:13 am
darkdestro27 PLATINUM, West Jefferson, Ohio
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hey whats up how are you ........... squirrel

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your work just as always is great. its interesting that your other work is no longer up but its still great.
aznskills90214 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 4 2010 at 7:11 pm
aznskills90214 BRONZE, Sterling, Virginia
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I honestly had to post twice. For some reason I really like the rhythm you have in your first stanza.
aznskills90214 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 4 2010 at 7:03 pm
aznskills90214 BRONZE, Sterling, Virginia
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Wow, I like the rhythm you have in the Stanza 1,2 and 4. Kinda weak in 3..But good job
GuardianAngel13 SILVER said...
on Nov. 4 2010 at 12:41 pm
GuardianAngel13 SILVER, Piscataway, New Jersey
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Omg. This is the one that speaks my heart :) amazing work, keep writing  :)