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Siz Forevers

October 9, 2012
By AnthonyDavidHall PLATINUM, Valrico, Florida
AnthonyDavidHall PLATINUM, Valrico, Florida
23 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth." - Oscar Wilde


Young, fragile friend with imposing laughter
How much time have I forsaken to you?
Six forevers and an hour after
Flinching each time a Southerly wind blew
We read poetry until the Sunset
Displayed our naked fears on your small bed
We were insecure wrecks before we met
Souls pulling each other back from the dead
But my need was so much greater than yours
The depths I’d fallen to only God knows
You’ve always run alone, to distant shores
Chasing that damn wind wherever it blows
When it turned to the North, you followed suit
Cutting the Romance, but leaving the root



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on Oct. 23 2012 at 4:20 pm
DanceOfBlades PLATINUM, Springfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first Law of Equivalent Exchange."

Might've made a typo on the title, but forget that, I LOVE THIS ONE TOO! Love your last four lines, strongly expressing frustration then drifting to the last line of an ended love. The style you write in, your voice, it's so distinct and well developed!

on Oct. 15 2012 at 10:59 am
AnthonyDavidHall PLATINUM, Valrico, Florida
23 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth." - Oscar Wilde

Okay, I clearly cannot type, because this is supposed to be "Six Forevers" lol