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The Dreadfully Depressing Sonnet Series, Number 1

March 12, 2013
By 9MysteryPoet7 BRONZE, Scheller, Illinois
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Feeling lonely with emptiness around, That long hair size and shape hole in my heart, Forth from my heart comes not one beating sound, and not getting anywhere from the start. Affection spanning from both far and wide, That canyon now turning into ravine, A trek not ventured from either one side, A challenge that no one has ever seen. Don't tell me to give up, I'll always try, Even when obstacles get in the way, Live every day and then let out a sigh, Retrieve a beauty brighter than the day. If Love I never ever get to say, Into the distance it will fade away.

© Dylan H., Phoenix, AZ

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This piece of poetry was inspired by a love that can't be known, as is it mentioned in this sonnet and others, which will be added. Taking inspiration from the poet Petrarch.
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Helena_Noel BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2013 at 11:40 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

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Oh, sweet! I like this one. Its got such a high flown air about it, and a depth you can feel. I really like the lines that went "Live every day and then let out a sigh,/ Retrieve a beauty brighter than the day." That part rocked. Keep writing!