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July 30, 2013
By maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc


How do you beat that sadness
That Is giving you so much pain
How do you beat that madness 
That is making you insane

How do you break through
When nothing is there but air
How do you come to
If you are stuck in dream land and can no longer care

You try to live and you fall into the role 
You believe you are back
Until you head burns with thoughts like coal
The pain has returned and is ready to attack

Will you let it encase you
Or will you beat it out
Can you stay true
When it try's to stab you all about

You try not to dwell 
You try not to care
But you already fell
And are far to aware

How can you ask for help
When you are to afraid to speak
Let out a yelp
Go out and seek 



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on Sep. 6 2013 at 10:15 pm
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
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&quot;What does not kill you makes you stronger!&quot; or<br /> &quot;Your only limits are the ones you set on yourself&quot; Love doesn&#039;t bring happiness, happiness can just happens to be found easier where there is love-- Sam

Ravishing  I ove how it connects to life and something everyone can relate to.

on Aug. 1 2013 at 7:18 pm
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

Thank you lilia im very glad you liked it. :)

Lilia PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 7:15 pm
Lilia PLATINUM, El Cajon, California
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Raise your words, not your voice. It is rain that grows flowers, not thunder. ~ Rumi

Rhyming is much harder than people give you credit for, and you do a splendid job. I'm really impressed with this piece. I had to read it twice!

on Aug. 1 2013 at 3:40 pm
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

Wow i cant belive how fast this poem as veiwed it already has surpasses all my other ones. Thank you for reading and for the compliments. it means a lot.

on Aug. 1 2013 at 3:39 pm
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

thank you for reading my poem and for the feed back. :)

on Aug. 1 2013 at 3:38 pm
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

wow. Thank you for reading it!!!

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 11:23 am
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

I love the rythm you used! Great poem and amazing first stanza! It really sets up the rest and you know its going to be good!

Kati312 SILVER said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 6:43 am
Kati312 SILVER, Parede, Other
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This is amazing, it is beautifully written and showed me something I hadn't thought of befire

MMOON PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 2:49 am
MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
26 articles 1 photo 30 comments

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&quot;Sop being afriad of what could go wrong. Start being positive about what could go right&quot;<br /> I also have another &quot;Loving someone is like hugging a cactus. The harder you hold the more it hurts&quot;

I really loved this. Thank you for sharing it with me!

on Aug. 1 2013 at 2:03 am
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

Thank you I was hoping people would see a little differently :)

on Aug. 1 2013 at 2:02 am
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

Thank you.

on Jul. 31 2013 at 7:53 pm
rockyyyyyyyyy SILVER, Lawrenceville, Georgia
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dont let people drive u crazy if you know its in walking distance

I loved it

on Jul. 31 2013 at 3:18 am
Sudsinthebucket SILVER, ?, Montana
5 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The best and most beautiful things must be felt with the heart.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Helen Keller

I really like this. I had never thought of it that way. It really opened up a new question. I really enjoyed it good job. :D