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All in all I enjoyed reading this article. I felt that it really projected the emotions you felt during the event well through your use of imagery, similes, and metaphors. The only thing that I felt was wrong with the article was the ending. It just built up really high emotions for me and then ended without a substantial amount of declining action, but good work. This article also sheds light on the problem of physical abuse in some schools. This is important because if people don't know that it is happening the problem will not be fixed or evened attempted to be fixed.
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