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The Way I see It

October 14, 2011
By Lauryn Fields BRONZE, Mason, West Virginia
Lauryn Fields BRONZE, Mason, West Virginia
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The way I see it
Is the sun is always brighter when I look at you.
My eyes open up and my soul is embraced by the feeling you give me when we're locked in each others arms.
I've never liked waiting on anything but waiting for you was the best thing I've ever done.
Because you see me when we're in a crowded room. You notice the way I move my arms gracefully back and forth when I walk and you notice the way I stutter when I'm around you.
But that's just it. That's love.
And love doesn't change.
But that's just the way I see it.



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on Oct. 20 2011 at 9:51 am
FangPoet DIAMOND, Wichita, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am yours as long as you are mine.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Teenagers are in the forest of bad ideas an hormones.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Your everything i want but nothing i need.&quot;<br /> &quot;I hate you so much ... i love you&quot;.<br /> <br /> &quot;Its the ugliest cute thing ever&quot;!<br /> <br /> &quot;Everything is cute in its own way<br /> <br /> In love the paradox occurs that two beings become one and yet remain two. - Erich Fromm

It was good, though you need a plot to increase your writing because i didnt really see it.