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Walk A little Slower

May 13, 2011
By Redneck99 BRONZE, Lawrence, Kansas
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Walk a little slower said a little boy so small,
I follow in your footsteps and I don’t want to fall.

When I grow up, I want to be just like you,
Ill fish, hunt, and work all the time,
Sundays sit on the front pew.

Your steps are leading my life,
And I know they’re just right.

When your gone and up in heaven,
God will send down a family blessin.

So walk a little slower grandpa,
Cause’ I’m following in your footsteps,
I know you won’t let me fall.

© Kris B., Lewisville, TX

The author's comments:
i hope that people will understand that you cant go to fast in life. if you want to make a good example of yourself go slow and do things the rite way.
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Angela♥ said...
on May. 24 2011 at 2:53 pm

Yeaaaaaaaaaa.

K. I love you toooooo.♥

♥Clarissa said...
on May. 24 2011 at 2:53 pm

Awwww!

i love you and you wait not you.... & you!

Angela♥ said...
on May. 24 2011 at 2:52 pm
But me more(;
Anagam BRONZE said...
on May. 19 2011 at 10:18 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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awesome :) i was just thinkin of tht sayin, 'if u got time 2 do it over, do it right da 1st time'
chrissie_star GOLD said...
on May. 19 2011 at 2:19 pm
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
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Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.

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nice job! love it :)
Shortblueeyes224 DIAMOND said...
on May. 19 2011 at 11:24 am
Shortblueeyes224 DIAMOND, Auburntown, Tennessee
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"Are We Happy Plastic People"- Casting Crowns "While we're sung to sleep by philosophies that save the trees and kill the children" - Casting Crowns "It's such a secret place, the land of tears"Antoine de Saint-Exupery

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I like this poem alot :)
brianna said...
on May. 19 2011 at 10:21 am
this is good i love it so much keep doing what your doing your good :)
Redneck99 BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2011 at 9:41 pm
Redneck99 BRONZE, Lawrence, Kansas
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Get~R~Done

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i will work on the ending. thanks 

 

llothamer16 BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2011 at 9:03 pm
llothamer16 BRONZE, Olathe, Kansas
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Great message! Really inspiring poem :]
Jordan. BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2011 at 8:19 pm
Jordan. BRONZE, Woodburn, Oregon
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&quot;If someone hurts you, Cry a river build a bridge, and get over it&quot;<br /> &quot;Ohana Means family&quot;

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I LOVE BOTH OF YOU GUYS.! :D
AngelaS said...
on May. 18 2011 at 3:07 pm
Ilove you more (;
♥Clarissa said...
on May. 18 2011 at 3:07 pm
i love you
AngelaS♥ said...
on May. 18 2011 at 3:05 pm
Hi Jordan!
Jordan. BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2011 at 11:43 am
Jordan. BRONZE, Woodburn, Oregon
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&quot;If someone hurts you, Cry a river build a bridge, and get over it&quot;<br /> &quot;Ohana Means family&quot;

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I agree, i love this peom.! :D
kaykay101 PLATINUM said...
on May. 18 2011 at 8:29 am
kaykay101 PLATINUM, Arundel, Maine
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this is a great poem!! :) if i were you i would make the last line a bit stronger but still, i looove this poem!