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Morning song

August 2, 2014
By wilds PLATINUM, Newfane, New York
wilds PLATINUM, Newfane, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Brave is not being fearless but being able to overcome those fears you have


Can you hear the morning song
can you feel the cool breeze
no part of the song can go wrong
can you hear the morning song
when heard it makes you freeze
the song is very long
can you hear the morning song.


The author's comments:
stop and listen to the beautiful sounds around you.

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on Oct. 2 2014 at 6:31 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

Sorry was typing fast so I had a few typos.

on Oct. 2 2014 at 6:30 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
53 articles 40 photos 204 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack<br /> Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn<br /> You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

This is amazing! But if I were you at the "Can you hear the morning song" I would have that be the beginging of a new stanza and have the last time you say it at the very end you should have it in a stanza of it's own. And thonks for the feedback on Lost Hope, I appreciate it!