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Dear Teenager, sincerely, Depression

February 25, 2017
By Thisisreal_life PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
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&quot;so do it. Decide. Is this the person you want to be? Is this the life you want to live? Is this the best you can be?&quot;<br /> &quot;I survived the fire because the fire within me burns brighter than the one around me&quot;

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Dear teenager,
You better prepare for the worst days of your life because, sweetie, I am on my way. I will show you no mercy, and I will take over your life. You will fight me so long and so hard, all you'll want to do is sleep. I will beat you so hard, all you will want to do is cry.
I will take over your precious mind at its weakest moment- a moment of sadness. I will make you fill to the brim with pain, the only way to escape it will be hurting yourself, one way or another.
I am what they call a murderer. I make teenagers commit suicide daily, even hourly. Every now and then, one will fight back. I usually come back for revenge.
Tell me, teenager, are you scared yet?
If not, don't you worry.
Yu will be soon.
Yours truly,
Depression

© Rebecca S., Coventry, RI

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WriteFreak BRONZE said...
on Aug. 9 2017 at 3:41 am
WriteFreak BRONZE, London, Other
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&quot;Everybody lies.&quot; - Hugh Laurie, House MD.

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This is so... Horribly true. It happens, and I can't think of a better way to describe it.
hwoodruff98 said...
on Apr. 9 2017 at 10:07 pm
hwoodruff98, Lititz, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"In a gentle way, you can shake the world." -Mahatma Gandhi<br /> <br /> "What will your verse be?" -Dead Poets Society <br /> <br /> "Write drunk, edit sober." -Ernest Hemingway

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I would consider this to be a piece of prose, which is often classified as poetry because it walks the thin line between fiction and poetry. So, you can't go wrong either way. :)
Thisisreal_life PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2017 at 11:52 pm
Thisisreal_life PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
48 articles 3 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;so do it. Decide. Is this the person you want to be? Is this the life you want to live? Is this the best you can be?&quot;<br /> &quot;I survived the fire because the fire within me burns brighter than the one around me&quot;

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I know, but that doesn't change the message of the piece
Sparaxis GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2017 at 8:05 pm
Sparaxis GOLD, Saint Marys, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you keep on picking on me, I&#039;ll mess up again. This time, on PURPOSE.&quot;

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No offense, but not really a poem.
Thisisreal_life PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 15 2017 at 8:26 pm
Thisisreal_life PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
48 articles 3 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;so do it. Decide. Is this the person you want to be? Is this the life you want to live? Is this the best you can be?&quot;<br /> &quot;I survived the fire because the fire within me burns brighter than the one around me&quot;

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Thank you so much!!!
tigerlilyorange SILVER said...
on Mar. 14 2017 at 6:56 pm
tigerlilyorange SILVER, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Whatever you can do or dream you can, begin it. Boldness has genius, power, and magic in it. Goethe

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This is all too true. All of us out here who experience shade of what you described appreciate your candid work:)
Thisisreal_life PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 11 2017 at 9:56 pm
Thisisreal_life PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
48 articles 3 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;so do it. Decide. Is this the person you want to be? Is this the life you want to live? Is this the best you can be?&quot;<br /> &quot;I survived the fire because the fire within me burns brighter than the one around me&quot;

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Thank you so much! I am glad someone enjoys my work so much!!
WolfWhisperer0911 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2017 at 10:59 am
WolfWhisperer0911 BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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Wow, that's really amazing! Never thought of a poem talking about depression. Keep up the amazing work!