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Shadow Eyes

February 17, 2023
By KarlaLuevanos119 BRONZE, El Paso, Texas
KarlaLuevanos119 BRONZE, El Paso, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes we need to be apart to understand just how much we truly love each other. - The Notebook


Her eyes are sharp and fierce like a siren, piercing into your heart

Her long lashes crawl out like a spider, thick and long

She looks up with a doey soft embracing love, with a dark smoke encasing each lid

Beautiful and dark

with still a goofy twinkle shimmy in her eyes 


The author's comments:

This piece is about my best friend with the most beautiful dark brown eyes.


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gabs_w GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2023 at 5:52 pm
gabs_w GOLD, Portland, Oregon
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Love the way you described her eyes as both intense and kind. Great job!

Afra ELITE said...
on Mar. 5 2023 at 10:09 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Gives beautiful imagery...Good job!!!