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Whisper

August 30, 2009
By Loki(norsegod) DIAMOND, Sapello, New Mexico
Loki(norsegod) DIAMOND, Sapello, New Mexico
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A whisper,
that's what it was,
a quiet reclamation,
of what has been,
my own translation,
of warm words,
a breath against my mind,
a whisper,
that's what it was,
a gentle message,
that dance through darkened hallways,
that glows in the night,
that sparks smiles from those,
who live in the abyss,
a whisper,
that's what it was,
the lyrics echo,
through the light and festivities,
erratically jumping,
here then there,
there then here,
through the laughing, living folk,
a whisper,
that's what it was,
then the words fade,
and with the quiet,
comes darkness,
the solemn fallout,
of what was,
a whisper,
that was the cause.



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Luthi3n GOLD said...
on Aug. 31 2022 at 2:23 pm
Luthi3n GOLD, Doriath, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer is a world trapped inside a person." —Victor Hugo

I have to admit I don't understand it, but it's beautifully written

Alice28 GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2009 at 8:18 pm
Alice28 GOLD, Somewhere Over The Rainbow, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Its hard to defeat someone...who never gives up.

I like this one. you have to read it over and over again and but when you get it. you get it