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September 5, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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Eyes are piercing
aquard blue
looking far away

Eyes can look
but never see
where there view might lay

Eyes that can't
or maybe won't
see the hate and pain

Eyes that yearn
to see much more
than what they've so far gained

© Tabitha B., Galesburg, IL

The author's comments:
I saw a kid in my class staring in to space and this poem just came to me! Weird right?
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hannahbee7 DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 5 2009 at 4:47 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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that is the best! And thank you I will definatly check out some of yours!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 5 2009 at 1:32 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Don't you just love it when poems just come to you n you don't even have to think about it lol it's even better when they turn out as good as this one lol great job:) u should check out some of my poems;)
hannahbee7 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 6:28 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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Yeah I love it when that happens!
CandieApple PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 6:02 pm
CandieApple PLATINUM, Hartford, Wisconsin
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The world is a stage, and we are merely players- Shakespeare (at least it goes something like that!!)

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Love it!! That happens to me too! One time I was just eating a muffin and, boom, it hit me...Sometimes inspiration can hit you in the strangest places and at the strangest times!