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Cold, Dark Abyss

October 14, 2009
By Ramzee SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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Ramzee SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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I&#039;m probably in the sky, flying with the fishes, <br /> Or maybe in the ocean, swimming with the pigeons, <br /> See my world is different.<br /> -Lil Wayne

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I'm fading into an abyss
Cold darkness pressing on me
Falling aimlessly into the depths of nowhere
No one is with me
No one will ever be
They will never understand me
Nor will they want to
I don't blame them
For I am alone is this cold, dark abyss
Forgotten in this world of judgements.

The author's comments:
I wrote this piece because many people get judged on how they look or dress or whatever and i just wish people would understand how people feel when they get judged.
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