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The Rain

October 27, 2009
By Know-Nothing BRONZE, Stow, Ohio
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Stings my eyes

As I try to run
Small cold bullets felt
All the way to my lungs.
But still, I move
as it pours and pours
Losing my way some as i go
Blinded by the dark and wind
Acid rain that i absorb
through and under my skin
So much rain,
Can't seem to win
but the light; the truth

No storm lasts, I know
Besidesm without rain
how can we grow?

© Hui Y., Potsdam, NY

The author's comments:
I know it's somewhat cheesy to refer to problems in life as "rain" but it's how I see it too. Hope its not too bad, im not good with rhythm and rhyme
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