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A Few Seconds of Heaven

January 15, 2010
By RyanF BRONZE, Park City, Utah
RyanF BRONZE, Park City, Utah
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Surfing down the fluffy white pillows
but on two planks instead
no worry in his mind
skiing up to the jump with the miraculous spinning and flipping movements

Grabbing his ski to tweak him into amazing ariels
wind flowing through his body as if he were nothing and then...
Down

Down


Down
Down through the air
hardening to wood
ripples of paint and color contrasting his body
splitting perfectly in two into skateboard-like shapes
everyone watching in awe as the slap into the ground



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on Jan. 25 2010 at 2:44 pm
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx