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I love the rain

February 12, 2010
By NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
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I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.<br /> - Susan B. Anthony

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I love the rain it's like music,
I love the rain because no one can see me cry for the tings I've done.
I love the rain because it's beutiful.
I love the rain because is's cool on my warm skin,
I love the rain because it washes away all my fears,
I love the rain because it's like the skys crying a thousand tears,
I love the rain because no one can see me for what I've done,
I love the rain and te way it cresses my skin,
I love the way it washes the hurt away, I love the sound the smell the feel,
I love the rain because I know the sun will shine again one day.

© Amanda T., Scituate, MA

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The rain inspired it i was in history and my teacher was going on and on and I started this.
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--LoveHappens-- said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 4:49 pm
--LoveHappens--, Fairfield, Connecticut
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I truly enjoyed this it really captures everything about the rain. Great job and keep writing!!! If you could please look at my work called The Pretty One and rate and comment. Thanks
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 4:13 pm
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
8 articles 7 photos 37 comments

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I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.<br /> - Susan B. Anthony

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Thanks i love the rain to lol
*Belle* said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 3:13 pm
this is excellent! i just love the way the poem flows together. and i love the rain too. :)
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 8:05 pm
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
8 articles 7 photos 37 comments

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I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.<br /> - Susan B. Anthony

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um repetition was the point of the work ...thats why its up repeating
Nikiblue PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 7:51 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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&quot;Stupid Is As Stupid Does.&quot; -Forest Gump (;<br /> &quot;No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude.&quot;

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The imagery was pretty good, but I think the repetition of "I love the rain" so many times is unnecessary. Yes if you repeated it three times maybe four it'd be ok, but you repeated it a little too many times. Also, the lines are a little long. If you spread the sentences in only a few phrases each stanza, it would have flowed a little better in my opinion. Sorry to be harsh.
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:49 pm
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
8 articles 7 photos 37 comments

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I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.<br /> - Susan B. Anthony

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Thanks to all of you!
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:47 pm
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
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I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.<br /> - Susan B. Anthony

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Thank you..yeah im using googl docs and it auto corrects things i dont want it to
KanenRenoir SILVER said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:46 pm
KanenRenoir SILVER, Caldwell, Texas
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Wow, this was really good,. There were a few typo, but I really enjoyed it, especially the last line.
chocolateharp SILVER said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 7:43 pm
chocolateharp SILVER, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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This is beautiful, and it feels very heartfelt. Great work; keep writing!!
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 2:50 pm
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
8 articles 7 photos 37 comments

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I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.<br /> - Susan B. Anthony

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I am thanking you out loud even if u can't hear me lol
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 2:49 pm
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
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I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.<br /> - Susan B. Anthony

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Thank you very much
SarClark BRONZE said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 2:36 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Yeah, I agree (Amber) This was really good!
love2love17 GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 2:36 pm
love2love17 GOLD, Springfield, Missouri
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This is very beautiful- I love the comparisons!
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:20 pm
NerdGirlVictoria SILVER, Mena, Arkansas
8 articles 7 photos 37 comments

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I declare to you that woman must not depend upon the protection of man, but must be taught to protect herself, and there I take my stand.<br /> - Susan B. Anthony

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Thank you very much
AmberAnn_d-_-b SILVER said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 5:15 pm
AmberAnn_d-_-b SILVER, Laconia, New Hampshire
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I like the format, good job :)