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i can see you

February 11, 2010
By jeanwolf GOLD, Lodi, California
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Eternity is forever, falsehood is a never

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I can see you
All your perfections
All your flaws
Your strengths
Your weaknesses
I see your
Smiling face
On the outside
Your crying face
On the inside
I see your
Desires
And dislikes
I know you
Feel invisible
But
I can see you

© Lucienne B., Parkland, FL

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tell me if you guys like this one i don't know if i like how it came out in the end of it all.
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