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A Thud

February 16, 2010
By FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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I don&#039;t have ambitions or desires. <br /> Being a poet isn&#039;t my ambition, <br /> it&#039;s my way of being alone.<br /> ~ Fernando Pessoa ~

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You know how you can’t hear your
Heartbeat, well not really,
Anyway; how it’s just a thudding
In your chest, and barely your ears?
That what I am to you, not even
A sound, just a thud,
An annoying, godforsaken thud
In your ears,
You hardly see me,
Your don’t hear me,
Not one little bit.

© Michelle M., Plainview, NY

The author's comments:
this may be a little depressing and may make you think that some people have no power, but i didnt mean to make it that way. everyone has power, so remember that. forget everyone who makes you think that and never let go of the ones who are always there for you
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