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April 12, 2010
By all_boys_hate_me BRONZE, Miamisburg, Ohio
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he is a rainbow on a day with no sun
a hug that never leaves
a teddy bear worn from all the tears that have been laid on it from heartbreak
he is a tear that never falls but instead kisses your cheek
he is the very definition of love itself
he is all of these things but above all he is life

© Carissa G., Aberdeen, WA

The author's comments:
I wrote this because of how I felt after finding out that the one guy that I loved more than anything in the world didn't love me back.
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Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER said...
on May. 14 2010 at 8:36 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Thanks everybody for the comments I really do apperciate them
sydney_hope GOLD said...
on May. 14 2010 at 8:28 am
sydney_hope GOLD, Round Rock, Texas
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I really do love this :)
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER said...
on May. 14 2010 at 6:30 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Thanks Mikayla!
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER said...
on May. 14 2010 at 6:29 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Thanks Krissy.
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD said...
on May. 13 2010 at 9:56 am
Secret_Love_Tells GOLD, Harrisonburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I love you more than the sun loves the sky and the moon loves the stars&quot; --my best friend<br /> &quot;Do it for love.&quot; --sark<br /> &quot;One does not succeed in never falling but in getting back up evertime they do so.&quot;- Confucius

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Ahhh! That is so cute! I love it so much! Good job Maggs!
Mistress_Of_The_Night said...
on May. 13 2010 at 8:56 am
hey maggs this is GOOD! GREAT! and everything in the middle lolzz !
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER said...
on May. 13 2010 at 8:44 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Thanks sis you know how much that means to me
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER said...
on May. 13 2010 at 8:43 am
Kittycorn_of_Dolphinia SILVER, Miamisburg, Ohio
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Thanks for the comment.
sNIKerz said...
on May. 13 2010 at 8:43 am

-Claps- This is amazing! I loved it! Great job sis! Keep on writting, Your awesome at it (:

- Xo Nikki(:

HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on May. 13 2010 at 7:10 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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awww, but you have wonderful awesome word choice!!!!!