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April 16, 2010
By White-pallet GOLD, Havelock, North Carolina
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White-pallet GOLD, Havelock, North Carolina
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can you feel that? yeah that twisting in my heart.
it's contorting and spreading.
man is it spreading. spreading quicker and quicker.
the hands of time are dieing my dear.
I can't wait any longer. I'm tired of this.
can't you feel it yet?
it pulsating within me. I can not escape it dearest.
what a ugly thing inside me. and just the sight of you feeds
it's insaitiable hunger.
that feeling? oh,
it's the pain caused by you

my 'love'.

© Jennifer H., Bethesda, MD

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a poem written on a whim about nothing and everything
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sparkofheart GOLD said...
on May. 6 2010 at 9:57 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
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wow. beautiful. i heard a personality that i havent noticed in any other poem before. i loved it! great work :)