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Forever, maybe

April 26, 2010
By wefellinLAVA PLATINUM, Copper Cliff, Other
wefellinLAVA PLATINUM, Copper Cliff, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'you touched my heart, through it's shell'


An unstoppable force comes across an unmovable object.
They fall in love and stay in place forever.
Once every now and then, there's a moment of doubt.
A wonder as to why they stay in place.
If love truly is the ultimate force,
then should they not move in one direction or another?
Everything must be taken into account.
Fate, what if they're meant to stay where they are?
The outside world may not tamper if they stay right here.
What if in unison, they stepped to the left,
as though the universe were doing an eternal waltz.
Every single thing moving in time.
Would anybody notice?
Would love have finally met it's match?
What if with that step, the clouds moved too quickly,
absorbed all of the oceans water,
and rained on only them.
Rain for forever, or maybe just a while,
depending on the music,
depending on the next step of the dance.
Has the word love finally met it's match?
Forever?



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AshTree SILVER said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 4:06 pm
AshTree SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Live your art" -made this one up myself. Simple, but true.

I love this. One part you put for forever I think it would be better as just forever, but I really like this

on May. 17 2010 at 10:24 pm
StevieRene SILVER, Magnolia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone will hurt you, you have to decide who is worth it <br /> - Bob Marley

Absolutely... Mind blowing.

on May. 17 2010 at 4:42 pm
iknowyourheart BRONZE, Casper, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;And I&#039;ll borrow words from all my favorite paragraphs to write a ballad while we say the things we hope would mean the most to me and each letter sent I&#039;ve found in the pages of hope for the days when I feel like I&#039;ve lost everything.&quot;-mayday parade

I like the whole 'forever' vs. 'love'. totally amazing.

 


on May. 16 2010 at 5:39 pm
Courtnay BRONZE, McDonald, Ohio
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this is very good!!!!!it has meaning...keep it up!!!:)....^_^