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Pretty Flames
June 29, 2010
The brightness,
Penetrates,
My surface,
Melts,
The stillness,
Ignites,
Sharp bursts,
Of heat,
Within,
The hands,
Of pretty flames,
Which pry,
At caverns,
In,
My frozen,
Heart.
My heart,
Which yearns,
To feel,
The precious warmth,
Of something…
Different,
Dangerous,
Foreign,
True,
Something…
More,
Which makes,
Me want,
To hold,
Your soft,
Warm,
Hand.
© Belinda H., Palm Harbor, FL
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haventy0uheard PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 3:25 pm
I wasn't saying this was a dark poem just that i write stuff like that at times..thankyou though! i appreciate the feedback =]
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD said...
on Sep. 12 2010 at 6:50 pm
huh. never exactly thought of this as a "dark poem", but i guess... what is a dark poem, anyway? but, in all, i really like this poem, and the commas (which i originally thought were slightly irritating) gave it a really nice rhythm.
haventy0uheard PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 24 2010 at 10:23 pm
Thank you! =]
haventy0uheard PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2010 at 6:56 pm
no problem check out some of my newer work if you wantt and comment! =]
-LeftBehindBroken- GOLD said...
on Aug. 22 2010 at 6:08 pm
THANKS!!!!! I REALLY LIKE YOUR WORK!Th
haventy0uheard PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2010 at 12:57 pm
haha thank you! I experiment with many different writing styles but I'll probably write a few more like this..and it's okay we all write dark poems sometimes hahaI know I do =]
-LeftBehindBroken- GOLD said...
on Aug. 21 2010 at 10:29 pm
THIS IS IN THE STYLE OF MOST OF MY WORK, BUT MY POEMS ARE MAINLY ABOUT EMOTIONS AND BEING INTHE DARK. AND BELIEVE ME. IM NOT A CREEP. AND MY CAPLOCK IS MESSED UP IM SO SORRY. BUT HONESTLY I LOVE YOUR WORK AND WANT TO READ MORE!!!!!This i
haventy0uheard PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 8:06 pm
thank you so much! i will definetely check out your work =]
haventy0uheard PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 4:43 pm
thank you =D
haventy0uheard PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 4:46 pm
thanks so much!
thezebrasgray PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 3:23 pm
i agree with ChowD. it has a unique rythm, that makes it great
haventy0uheard PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 8:14 pm
thanks<3 i wrote this a while ago so i wasn't sure if it was that good so i appreciate the feedback!:]
whisperingofdawn GOLD said...
on Jul. 14 2010 at 10:18 pm
I <3 this run-on in particular! :] Original rhythm!
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