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Lost Words

July 6, 2010
By AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.


The pencil moves across the paper.
The thoughts of my inner mind are now on paper.

They are public for all to see.
My words no longer only belong to me.

The relief I had while writting is gone now.
Replaced with regret.

Regret for my lost words...
I cannot take them back.

They are forever someone elses to read...

Writting down my lost words, brings me peace.
Peace from the turmoil in everyday life.

M words are lost to me...
but they are found by someone else...



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on Dec. 19 2010 at 12:16 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thanks! Its really nice of you to go and comment on all of my poetry!<3

on Dec. 16 2010 at 4:05 pm
Origami_Ferret SILVER, Virginia Beach, Virginia
8 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Let&#039;s go.&quot;<br /> &quot;We can&#039;t.&quot;<br /> &quot;Why not?&quot;<br /> &quot;We&#039;re waiting for Godot.&quot;<br /> --------------------------------<br /> &quot;Get thee to a nunnery!&quot;

I like this one too! Especially the second stanza-- you should maybe try to go for more rhyming in these poems, I feel like it helps make your point. Good job! :D