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Forever Away

June 21, 2010
By letmekeepthis GOLD, Mount Juliet, Tennessee
letmekeepthis GOLD, Mount Juliet, Tennessee
17 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"whats past is prologue" - shakespeare


Ive been left out
Cold in the dark
Unfeeling
Finally numb from too much pain

I feel the salty tears
As they run down my chapped face
I cry out one more time
Praying for an answer

I get none
Decide God's too busy
Get back on my knees
And beg, again, for more strength

No more pain
I beg
No more tears
I cry

Too late, you whisper
There is no warm goodbye
For a hurt girl
Who has tarnished armor

Not for you, my love
I hear you laugh
And as I curl up again
I wonder if the pain will ever go away


The author's comments:
Live your life, please, for those of us who cant

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on Aug. 19 2010 at 9:25 pm
letmekeepthis GOLD, Mount Juliet, Tennessee
17 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"whats past is prologue" - shakespeare

thanks you guys! (:

on Aug. 18 2010 at 11:38 pm
oSoSiLeNtLyScReAmInG SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
forever has no meaning when your living in the moment

i love it it seems so realistic . i can feel the emotion and pain behind each word. ive felt that pain before andi think it isn't only me who can relate to this.

on Aug. 18 2010 at 2:40 pm
classicStara PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
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 this is really deep. i love it and can really relate to it. keep up the good work. its really sentimental.

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