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A Love Note to a Suicide

July 21, 2010
By pencilchick GOLD, San Jose, California
pencilchick GOLD, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
The sleep of reason produces monsters -fransisco goya


Were you here I would kiss your lips,
Yet darkness steals the warmth and life
Were you here I would love you until the end of time,
Time ended before I was ready.
Hear me now: I love you so,
Yet that was not enough for you.
It makes me want to take the same path you did,
At the same time, I do not.
You were a coward, and I loved you.
Life got hard so you left, love and all.
I hope you hear me in your afterlife,
Hear the morning,
The life,
The love,
The moving on.
Yes, I loved you,
Now I love life.



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on Aug. 27 2010 at 9:29 pm
dream..catcher.. BRONZE, Dream Landing, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never frown because you never know who is falling in love with your smile..&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;The best things in life are unseen, that&#039;s why we close our eyes when we kiss, cry, and dream..&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Normal is only a mode on a washing machine..&quot;

awh,,this is very good,,im guessing this really happend.? it doesnt sound like something that could just be made up,,your feelings sound so strong,,i really feel for you. i can relate. its a really good writing.

on Aug. 27 2010 at 5:27 pm
sunrise_faerie GOLD, Fredericksburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
things are only as dark as you make them. <br /> there is always beauty in every situation. look for it and you will see.<br /> smile; sometimes it&#039;s all that will keep you from crying.

great! connect with this piece very much! read some of my things?

on Aug. 26 2010 at 6:54 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;when you cry, do you waste your tears?&quot; Madonna

very empowering... based on true experience? read some of mine?